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Love your book! Keep going 🩷

I rly liked it. I could see the difference from the first draft and it was definitely better. Maybe work on the punctuation and spelling (it doesn’t rly matter tho because it is only a draft) Apart for that it was exelent!

On your last post you went "I...I like you" but maybe you should do something in between like ' the words thick in my throat, I struggled to confess "I.." , I hesitated"I like you". My cheeks heated at the realisation of what I had just said and to who .' Stuff like that.

Maybe, instead of her describing herself, get it involved in the plot (e.g. Becca stroked my insanely hard to control blonde curly hair). Also try to use more advanced vocab to draw the readers in!! I love it so far though!! - ⭕♥️ℹ️✌️💥

I think your paragraph was rly good but I think you may of missed out a few words tho and not being rude but I can’t tell if the character is a girl or boy, I’m guessing it’s a girl tho. I don’t think you mentioned the main characters name in the beginning bit so Mabey mention that? Hope that helped xx 🥰

You should do Charlotte or Chris or Becca or Naomi

So for boys like Levi! or Lucian! and for girls Opal, Charlotte/Cherry, Blair, Kacey and or Linia

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